Post by account_disabled on Feb 19, 2024 10:02:54 GMT 2
Testimonial is in a great spot but… This testimonial is in an effective spot but I feel that Adobe could use a shorter, punchier quote that would be more effective. 4. What kind of headline is this? This is boring. It seems like the headline you’d see on a privacy policy, and it is horrible for cold traffic. There is no benefit statement at all and it doesn’t introduce me to the page. However the sub headline is better, so how about combining the two like this: Discover Why Adobe Marketing Cloud’s Analytics Can Give Your Business The Insight It Needs This headline combines the product name with it’s benefit to catch the visitor’s attention. 5. Great.
It’s all fine and dandy that you’re a leader. But who cares? Does your Buy TG Database success mean that my business is going to run more smoothly? I want to hear about how you will help me. Rule #1 about selling: Make it about the customer. 6. Tell me what I get This little text is the only place that tells me what I will get if I fill out the form. Adding supporting text to the form box itself (above the first name field) would be more effective, preventing the reader from having to read it all to ascribe value to what it says. Overall this page needs a clear purpose.
As a visitor I’ve arrived on this page and they start telling me how great they are. Instead they need to find a clear benefit that will make my life easier/better/faster/cleaner/more lucrative and focus on that. App design handbook app-design-handbook Click for full-size image 1. Fantastic Design The page pops, it’s clean and the text contrast is ideal. All in all it’s easy to read and navigate through. The testimonial above the fold is powerful enough to push a visitor towards a conversion. 2. Nice, short form This is the type of form that I like.
It’s all fine and dandy that you’re a leader. But who cares? Does your Buy TG Database success mean that my business is going to run more smoothly? I want to hear about how you will help me. Rule #1 about selling: Make it about the customer. 6. Tell me what I get This little text is the only place that tells me what I will get if I fill out the form. Adding supporting text to the form box itself (above the first name field) would be more effective, preventing the reader from having to read it all to ascribe value to what it says. Overall this page needs a clear purpose.
As a visitor I’ve arrived on this page and they start telling me how great they are. Instead they need to find a clear benefit that will make my life easier/better/faster/cleaner/more lucrative and focus on that. App design handbook app-design-handbook Click for full-size image 1. Fantastic Design The page pops, it’s clean and the text contrast is ideal. All in all it’s easy to read and navigate through. The testimonial above the fold is powerful enough to push a visitor towards a conversion. 2. Nice, short form This is the type of form that I like.